Monday, October 21, 2019

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1.  Use a question or a strong statement to hook the reader into reading your article.

2.  Use lots of details and avoid generalization.

3. make connections to help support your theme, always use hooks, don't start every sentence with I and try to rephrase your start to make it sound better while reading

Texas High School Section

1. Lilie Holmes
2. Reese's Peanut Butter Cups size
3. She thinks that after all the years she has been eating peanut butter cups the size is just right.
4. No
5.  She explained why she felt that way and gave an example by saying the size of the candy fits right in your pocket as one of her examples of why reeses are the perfect size.
6.There are no quotes in the story.
7. They wrote in first and for the begging half of the story was mostly in 3rd.


1.Amelia Jauregui
2. Cinema Summaries
3. Amelia  goes into detail about new movies in theaters, as well as some old classics by informing us who is in them, what there about and explains what type of person would like this movie.
4. Sort of she shows tells us what type of people would like this movie and gives us an idea of what there like.
5. She didn't state her opinion on any of these movies, but she did write and quote movie critics reviews and thoughts on the movie.
6. She uses quotes from movie reviewers such as IMDB and Rotten Tomatoes.
7. She never goes into first person always from a 3rd person point of view.

1. Sam Bui
2. Fortnite Chapter 2
3. Sam explains what Fortnite changed about there game and brought into there second chapter. Such as a new map, boats and fishing
4. No this is just a commentary no opinions in this article.
5. Sam doesn't give any opinion's on Fortnite's new chapter only facts.
6. Sam doesn't use any quotes pulls out information from different sites and just lays out facts about his topic.
7. This is complete from 3rd person no opinion at all.

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