Inverted Pyramids

1. What,When,Why
2. Cause these will give a complete answer when interviewing.
3.Should be linked to the paragraph before them. The quote should elaborate on the previous paragraph.
4.They give us the words completely from what the person said your not changing any words.
5. Can be longer then one sentence. Ex "Quarterback Vince Young Said"
6.he action of ascribing a work or remark to a particular author, artist, or person.
7. Noun then verb
8. Transitions are what link the paragraphs together
9. Indirect Quote Transition, Fact Transition, Partial Quote Transition
10.Are the most important and recent facts first? Is the story accurate? Are the sources identified fully?  Are the paragraphs short?  Is the sentence structure varied in the story? Is the story neat and double-spaced so that it is easy to read? Does your story flow? Did you use the transition/ quote formula? Did you use active voice?
11. Being bias and paragraphs to long also poor grammar and spelling

             During 2010-2011 school year a High School had 18 the following year in march the number is already 22. The number is only rising and school isn't even over yet. After these results the school had to do something to decrease the number of fights. 
              The school district had no other options, but to hire the Teen Conflict Resolution Team. After this, a rule changed that if any kid who was in a fight would have to complete a non-violent workshop ,“Students have to learn how to solve life’s problems without violence, and this program will teach our students just that,” said Mr. Brown a teacher at that high school.
              Following those changes the rules a of violence will still be enforced even though you have to attend a workshop as well. Andy Opal a student at the high school disagrees and thinks that getting suspended and having to go to a workshop is “ Just too much.”